I'm not entirely sure that I should post this but I feel a need to do so. I'm not quite sure why...
I'd be very interested hear if anyone finds this too... too... something...
Rapture
My lips meet yours
Words die unspoken
A kiss... a moment unending
A rapture that stirs a yearning in my soul
My eyes alight upon your beauty
A breath that catches...
A heart that skips a beat in joy
A rapture that stirs a yearning in my soul
The curve of your face catches the evening sun
Eyes alive with love
Your smile takes my breath away
A rapture that stirs a yearning in my soul
Just...
Just to hear your voice
Just to touch your face
Just to hold your hand
Just to hold you close
Just to love you always
I think as long as you're happy with your post, that's the most important thing. :o)
ReplyDeleteThere's something very musical about your poetry... Have you considered songwriting, or even putting your words to music?
I find your articulation of love inspiring and moving. Keep up the good work, and don't be afraid to experiment with the conventions all you like.